雅思创作如何得高分?

雅思创作如何得高分?

雅思创作预测分析

一类重中之重:

财经类:

Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 许多人觉得电子计算机和互联网技术针对孩子教育比去大学合理,有觉得教师和大学针对小孩的学习的方法更为关键,探讨二种见解? [点击查看语料库:线上教育]

科技类:

Some people think that museums are getting less important, when people can have access to information on the Internet, to what extent do you agree or disagree? 许多人觉得历史博物馆不关键,人们能够在互联网上得到信息内容(参观博物馆),是不是认可?[点击查看语料库:历史博物馆是不是关键]

政府部门类:

Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, to what extent to you agree or disagree? 许多人觉得政府部门应当给公民的文化教育和诊疗付钱, 你是不是愿意这一见解?[点击查看语料库:政府部门是不是该为公民文化教育诊疗付钱]

有关题型:

Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss the two opinions and give your views. 许多人觉得政府部门应当给公民的文化教育和诊疗付钱,许多人觉得这并不是政府部门的义务,探讨二种见解,得出你的建议?

社会发展类:

Currently many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it? 如今,大家没办法均衡工作中生活的别的一部分,探讨其缘故再明确提出解决方案.[点击查看语料库:怎样均衡工作中生活]

工作中类:

More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 愈来愈多的公司准予员工在家办公,是积极主动還是消沉的?[点击查看语料库:远程办公的利弊]

二类重中之重:

科技类:

Nowadays, people perform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping as well as business transactions, without the need of meeting other people face to face. What are the possible effects of the phenomenon on the individual and the society as a whole? 如今许多人能够根据互联网做许多阶段,比如买东西和买卖,这针对本人和社会发展的危害是啥? [点击查看语料库:网上购物的危害]

广告词类:

Nowadays, customers are facing increasing advertisements with the competition of different companies. To what extent do you think customers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect the customers? 如今广告词越来越多,广告词在多少的水平上危害了顾客,怎样维护顾客?[点击查看语料库:广告词的利弊]

电视机类:

A study shows that a lot of children, from the age 7 to 11, spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should be taken to solve it? 科学研究显示信息,7岁到11岁的年青人花销过多時间看电视剧,打游戏,这针对小孩,家中和社会发展的危害在哪?应当怎样处理?[点击查看语料库:电视游戏的危害]

违法犯罪类:

Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 将犯罪嫌疑人送入牢房并不是合理的方法处理违法犯罪,人们应当给他出示接纳文化教育与工作学习培训的机遇,是不是认可?[点击查看语料库:犯罪嫌疑人更新改造]

身心健康类:

Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree or disagree? 维持身心健康是本人针对社会发展的义务,可是,并不是使本人获益的良好的习惯,是不是认可?[点击查看语料库:身心健康对社会发展和本人的危害]

你和雅思的故事 - Go Hard or Go Home

发表于 2019-12-07

雅思写作分析及语料库

题型

政府部门类 + 环境保护类
Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?

作家立场:适用城市在对外开放地多植树.

布局:

段首:背景图详细介绍 + 异议聚焦 + 作家立场
二段:第一次适用立场
三段:第二次适用立场
四段:妥协不愿意观点的合理化 + 坚持不懈己方立场
尾段:再度亮明观点

构思扩展:

为什么保护生态环境更为关键:
1. 植树有利于保护生态环境,这能够为大家出示更为身心健康的生存环境,因而,能够提升大家的健康指标和优越感.
2. 保护生态环境也有利于保持資源的可持续发展趋势,另外,吸引住大量的项目投资.比如,大连市是一座花苑城市,由于园林绿化和环境保护的取得成功,其吸引住了大量的旅游投资,环境保护变成推动社会经济发展的关键要素之一.南京市的梧桐树给大家提出示了一片荫凉和休闲娱乐的好地方.
3. 保护生态环境有利于为后代子孙构建更为身心健康的生存条件.

范文

段首:背景图详细介绍 + 异议聚焦 + 作家立场

The government, as a decision-maker, is the representative of citizen’s basic interests. In this sense, every governmental policy will inevitably exert a profound influence on the further prosperity of the nation. People differ greatly in their views as to whether or not it is more preferable for the government to put more efforts into planting trees in the open area of a city instead of building more houses. To voice my opinion,city dwellers will benefit more from the improvement of the city environment, although the value of new construction cannot be underestimated.
点评:段首个性化开场;立场独特.

二段: 第一次适用作家立场

The first convincing argument why beautifying the city is superior to the establishment of new houses is that a cleaner and healthier city environment can provide city residents with a better living space,which would be conducive to one’s health. For example, in my city, increasing number of trees have been planting per year, thus, many of us can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the closeness to nature, many senior citizens enjoy taking a stroll in a woods around South Lake. Therefore, the multiplication of new plants has greatly decreased the possibility of infecting respiratory diseases.
点评:植树给大家的身心健康和歇息衣食住行产生的利好消息.

三段:第二次适用作家立场

Here is a good example providing strong support to my stand. Why environmental protection is much more important in comparison with economic development is that eco-friendly policies will benefit a city or a nation in the long run. The issue reminds me of a clean and beautiful city Dalian, which is embraced by a rich variety of green trees or plants. As the former mayor said, Dalian will never develop economy at the cost of hurting the environment. Much to our encouragement, eco-friendly environment attract more business men and enterprises to make huge investment in this eco-friendly city.
点评:城市植树针对城市发展趋势的利好消息

四段:妥协不愿意观点的合理化

Indeed,I have to concede that in some metropolitan cities in the world , it is irrational and unfeasible to expect the local governments to give priority to planting trees. By contrast,in order to ease the pressure of housing shortage,proper land resources should be allocated the construction of new infrastructure or commercial buildings. However, I want to rebut that it is more viable for most cities to attach importance to the amelioration of the environment.
点评:妥协原题观点的合理化 + 坚持不懈己方立场

尾段:再度亮明观点

In a nutshell, I re-affirm my view that planting more trees is clearly a worthwhile endeavor helping to protect the environment. The role of the government in environmental conservation is challenging yet inescapable. However, as for those densely populated cities, governments of all levels should have their own strategies of developing the cities.
点评:尾段再度注重己方立场.

发表于 2019-12-07
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