雅思7分范文如何写?

雅思7分范文如何写?

雅思创作话题汇总

〖工作中类〗

Currently,many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it? 如今,一些人无法均衡工作中生活的别的一部分,缘故在哪,怎样处理?

〖科技类〗

➀ Now, people can use Internet to see historic objects freely. People think we don’t need museum in the future. To what extend do u agree or disagree. 如今,大家能够在互联网技术上见到历史文化,许多人觉得人们在将来不用历史博物馆,你一直在多多方面愿意或抵制这一观点?

〖环境保护类〗

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems cannot be solved unless individuals take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion? 许多人觉得环境污染问题本人没法承担,许多人觉得环境污染问题不可以被处理除非是本人付诸行动,探讨二种观点,谈及你的观点.

〖社会发展类〗

Someone believes that a tax-payer has done his part as a citizen. However, someone believes that a citizen should assume other responsibilities. Discuss both views and present your opinion. 许多人觉得纳税者就早已尽来到公民义务,有觉得觉得公民应当担负别的义务,探讨二种观点,谈及你的观点?

〖违法犯罪类〗

Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? 许多人觉得将犯罪嫌疑人送进牢房并不是最好是的处理违法犯罪难题的方式 ,文化教育与工作学习培训是更强的方式 ,你一直在多多方面上适用或抵制这一观点?

〖政府部门类〗

Some people say that governments should pay for the healthcare and education but other people say that it is not the governments' responsibility. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion. 有些人政府部门应当给诊疗教育付钱,有些人这并不是政府部门的义务,探讨二种观点,谈及你的观点.

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发表于 2020-01-09

雅思7分范文

话题:

Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their study in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

7分参照范例

Students ought to spend most of their time on the school work, but nowadays it is not uncommon that students are simply not able to put their heart to study.

(1) 本段是开始段,应用的直截了当法,立即明确提出状况,但在措辞上并不是照搬题型,只是反映出转变.

(2) It is not uncommon that... ......并不是少见

(3) Put one’s heart to... 集中注意力做......

There could be two reasons why this happens. First, today the students are surrounded by so many distractions that they gradually find that learning is too boring and uninteresting. While students two decades ago had nearly no choice but sit in the classroom and read books, students today have easy and fast access to Internet, on which they can do almost all things. For instance, they can play computer games, watch videos, search for any information they need, and chat with their friends, to mention just a few. So, having been used to this kind of“easy” online life, many young people simply cannot put their heart into the more serious and consuming school work.

(1)本段解析学生讨厌学习的第一个原因,都是浅部次的外界原因:学生由于外界干扰(特别是在是互联网技术的干扰)而反感学习.本段的论证思路是:学生发觉学习乏味-- 较为今日的学生和20年以前的学生--举例说明今日的学生能够网上干什么-- 上外网的結果就是说不想要再用心学习.留意与这一思路配对的是一些常见句式.例如:while...; so, having done..., they...

(2)Distraction: 干扰

(3)Access:进到;应用

(4)To name just a few:如此等等;不一而足

(5)Consuming 消耗的(例如time-consuming用时的;energy-consuming耗动能的)

Another important factor that affects the students' attitude towards their school work is that a good education seems not as important as before. For quite a long time, receiving a good education was the only way for young people to get a decent job and earn a high salary. But now, this is apparently not the case any more. Influenced by business stars like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs, many young people now begin to believe that one’s success does not have much to do the education s/he receives. The students, therefore, are not motivated enough to focus on their learning.

(1)本段探讨学生讨厌学习的另一个缘故,都是更多方面的本质缘故:学生已不坚信只能受文化教育才可以取得成功了.本段的论证思路是:主题风格句--之前的状况--如今的状况-- 依据.在论述的全过程中,顺带列举一些事例,能够展现学生的知识层面,另外提高优秀作文的人性化.

(2)Factor 要素

(3)Decent 形象的

(4)Apparently 表层看地;显著地

(5)Motivated 有驱动力的

As education of the young is so important to the future of the world, we ought to find ways out of this embarrassing situation. For example, the school and parents should work together to set limitson the time children spend online. Internet is a good great invention, yet obsession with it will certainly reduce the time that should have been put to more serious work. Besides, young people should be made to understand that life is not just about making money, but about having rich and colorful experience and education is the best gateway to that rewarding life. (349 words)

(1)本段对于前边2个缘故明确提出解决方法.本段论证思路是:必须寻找解决方案--第一个方法是限定学生上外网時间--过多上网的坏处-- 第二个方法是让学生搞清楚读书的意义是有着更丰富多彩精彩纷呈的生活.

(1) Embarrassing 让人难堪的

(2) Set limits on... 给......限制

(3) Obsession (with) 迷恋(于......)

(4) Gateway 通道

(5) Rewarding 有收益的;有使用价值的

发表于 2020-01-09
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