雅思优秀范文如何写?

雅思优秀范文如何写?

雅思Part 1 都考些什么?

青少年犯罪

(1)What are reasons for and solutions to juvenile delinquency?

(2)Should young adults who commit crimes be treated equally with adults?

考题例子

In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?(2009.11.7,2010.8.5,2014.8.2,2015.6.18)

Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2013.11.9,2015.4.25,2017.5.6)

处罚对策

(3)What is the most common solution to crime?

(4)Can better education prevent people from becoming criminals?

(5)Should young criminals be sent to jails?

考题例子

Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss and give your opinion.

(2008.1.12,2009.9.17,2010.8.5,2013.2.16,2014.8.2,2016.1.14)

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison. To what extent do you agree?

(2008.9.18,2009.9.17,2012.5.12,2018.7.28,2018.11.3)

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?(2015.8.8)

违法犯罪是不是没法防止

(6)Can crimes be prevented?

考题例子

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

(2009.12.19,2012.11.3,2015.09.03)

主次范畴

武器装备的危害

(7)Can a police force with guns reduce the level of crime?

考题例子

Some people believe that if a police force carries a gun, it will encourage higher levels of violence in the whole society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2011.8.20,2014.6.7)

牢房作用

(8)Will criminals commit crimes again after they are set free from prison?

考题例子

After criminals are set free, some of them continue to commit crimes. Why do you think this is the case? Provide solutions.(2009.6.13)

新闻媒体的危害

(9)Why do people feel unsafe either at home or out?

考题例子

Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?(2008.8.16,2016.10.22,2017.5.20,2017.5.25)

People do not feel safe either when they are at home or when they go out. Why is the case? What can we do to reduce this problem?(2015.6.27)

天生与后天性要素

(10)Are most crimes caused by people who are bad by nature?

考题例子

Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2014.11.8)

你和雅思的故事 - Go Hard or Go Home

发表于 2020-01-11

雅思作文拓展素材

一、政府部门投资类

Some people argue that the government should spend money on public services and facilities but not on the arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011.6.11)

Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theatres or sport stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?

Some countries achieve international sporting success by building specialized facilities to train top athlete instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? (2016.12.3)

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree? (2017.2.25)

The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

二、国际性支援

Some people believe that famous people’s support towards international aids organizations draws the attentions to problems. Others think that celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. (2015.3.21)

Some people argue that countries should have a moral obligation to help each other;on the other hand, some people argue that a large amount of aid money does not reach the poor of the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2016.5.21)

Environment problems are too big for individual countries or people to solve. Rather, it should be dealt with at an international level. Do you agree or disagree? (2014.7.26)

三、老弱病残

seniorcitizensIn many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?

Older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems does this cause and what are the solutions?

四、违法犯罪

After criminals are free, some of them continue to commit crimes. Why do you think this is the case? What are the solutions? (2009.6.13)

Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be used. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2012.5.12)

Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison. Others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2013.2.16)

Should capital punishment be a major deterrent to crime?

五、生活起居

An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their lives. It is positive or negative development? (2017.9.16)

Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian and they do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015.9.19)

In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

六、教育

An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their lives. It is positive or negative development? (2017.9.16)

Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian and they do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015.9.19)

In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

七、教育

With the wide use of computers and the Internet, people can study and work from home without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? (2014.4.26)

People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face to face. What are the effects of this on individuals and society as a whole? (2007.3.31)

Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree? (2009.2.12)

There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone? (2006.1.14)

八、新闻媒体类

We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trust the journalist, what do you think? And what do you think are the important qualities that a journalist should have?

Some people think that advertising discourages us from being different individuals, as all people want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015.7.11)

Advertising is having a bigger influence on our daily lives. Some people believe the negative effects of advertising outweigh the positive effects. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children, some people think there are lots of negative effects for children, and should ban it. To what extent you agree or disagree?

There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

九、文化艺术类

Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others. However, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people say that governments should spend money on measures to save languages that are used by few speakers, while others believe it's a waste of financial resources.

Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2011.3.5)

Across the recent world, a few of languages are increasing in use and the uses of many other languages are declining. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (2013.11.16)

The advantages of the spread of English as global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that spreading multinational companies and the increasing globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2016.4.2)

十、自然环境类

Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015.1.31)

Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society, which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish. What are the causes and solutions?

People around the world are confronted with serious shortage of freshwater. What are the reasons? How to solve the problem?

发表于 2020-01-11

雅思优秀范文解析

种类

社会发展生活服务类

题型

When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

分析

本题归属于社会发展生活服务类话题讨论.探讨是不是必须修建大量的公园和体育设施并非购物中心让大家渡过空余岁月.学生在思索论点论据时必须涉及双方论点论据的答复,且针对重要语句“spend free time〞的答复也不能缺少.

文章体裁

P1:导入话题讨论+说明见解

P2:论述修建大量体育设施针对大家渡过空闲岁月的重要性;

P3:论述修建大量公园针对大家渡过空闲岁月的重要性;

P4:认可大家还可以在购物中心消遣時间,可是非任何人都能够选用这类方法.

P5:小结:重申观点和归纳文章内容论点论据.

高分数话题讨论表述

restrain from 抑止

contract diseases 患病症

relieve of 从......摆脱

escape from 逃出

immune system 免疫力管理体系

blood circulation 血液循环系统

is a preferable choice 是一个受钟爱的挑选

Despite this,…即便如此

affordability 消费力

lead a healthy lifestyle 推动身心健康的生活习惯

高分数构造

It is recommended/conceivable that…主语从句

for the reason that…同位语从句

…,which is conducive to…非限制定语从句

Supposing that…状语从句

Hardly can…倒装句

…where…定语从句

Consequently,…介词放句首

范文

In an attempt to provide a better way for citizens to spend their leisure time, it is recommended that more public parks or sports facilities rather than shopping centers should be constructed. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with this proposal.

以便给群众出示更强的休闲娱乐方法,人们提议修建大量的公园或体育设施,而并不是购物中心.就我来讲,我完全同意这一提议.

To commence with, the construction of sports facilities enables citizens to take more exercise in their free time, which is conducive to both physical and psychological health. In contemporary society, fiercer competition and heavy workload restrain employees from being relaxed, even cause them contract mental diseases such as depression. Supposing that devoted to a basketball or football match after work, they are able to relieve themselves of stress and escape from harsh reality temporarily. As for keeping fitness, it is conceivable that regular exercise strengthens immune system, improves blood circulation as well as increases the size of muscle fibers of body. Consequently, spending free time in sports activities is a preferable choice for the public.

最先,体育设施的基本建设使中国公民在空余時间开展大量的锻练,这有益于身体健康.在如今的社会,猛烈的市场竞争和繁杂的劳动量限定了职工的释放压力,乃至造成她们得了忧郁症等精神类疾病.假定她们在下班了专心致志于篮球赛或足球赛,她们可以临时释放压力,逃出严苛的实际.对于维持身心健康,能够想像,有规律性的锻练能够提高人体免疫系统,改进血液循环系统,提升肌纤维的尺寸.因而,课余时间从业户外活动对群众是更可用的挑选.

In addition, public parks are places where residents can spend weekends with families and friends. Having a picnic or chatting, reading books, playing games with children are common activities they could do there. What’s more, the young and old can do running, jogging or Tai Chi in the mornings or evenings in parks. Without adequate parks, hardly can people engage in those actives during their free time.

除此之外,公园是住户能够与亲人和盆友欢度礼拜天的地区.野炊或闲聊,念书,和小朋友们打游戏是普遍的主题活动,她们能够做.更关键的是,年青人和老人能够做慢跑,跑步或陈氏太极在早晨或夜里在公园.沒有充足的公园,大家没办法在空余時间从业这种主题活动.

Admittedly, shopping centers are useful business establishments in which people enjoy time off work by purchasing fancy goods. Despite this, merely a small proportion of citizens are able to attain such kind of enjoyment due to their affordability of items in malls. Therefore, investing resources in their construction fails to ensure the majority, particularly the poor and old, enjoy their leisure time.

无可否认,购物中心是有效的商业服务场地,大家这里能够根据选购高档服装来享有下午茶时光.即便如此,只能一小部分群众可以得到那样的享有,由于她们买起的货品在大型商场.因而,在她们的基本建设上资金投入資源并不可以确保大部分人,特别是在是穷光蛋和老人享有她们的空闲時间.

In conclusion, I firmly support the number of public parks or sport facilities should exceed that of shopping malls, for the reason that the former benefits more people and serves a purpose in leading a healthy lifestyle for citizens.

总而言之,我坚定不移地适用公园或体育设施的总数应当超出购物中心的总数,由于前面一种有益于大量的人,服务项目于一个目地,为群众过上好日子身心健康的生活习惯.

发表于 2020-01-11
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