Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Everybody has to work. The question is:which is more important in work, the job security or the job satisfaction? Some people think the job security is more important than job satisfaction, but others believe the opposite. In my view, both job security and satisfaction are important.
We all need a secure job. If we have a stable job, we can make a lot of money. Then we can buy big houses and expensive cars, and can travel all around the world. This will make our life more wonderful. If we have a stable job, we will not have to worry about losing our job. So we do not have to spend time looking for jobs. This means we can have more time to stay together with our family.
评价：本段论述“job security"的必要性.提出2个原因：1)假如有平稳工作,人们能够赚到许多 钱.怎样论述这一分论点论据呢?老雅提出的”当然延续法“能够充分发挥.赚到钱后人们能够买房和车,能够到世界旅游,那样我们的日常生活就多种多样了.2) 假如有平稳工作,人们就无须担忧丧失工作.当然延续下来,不担忧丧失工作,就多余花時间去找工作,結果呢,人们总有時间守候亲人了.那样,用”当然延续法“,2个原因都获得了一定的论述,层级十分清晰,一句句写来,搞清楚准确无误.
However, it is also important to have an interesting job. If we have an interesting job, we can do our job well. Then we can get happiness from our job. If we are not interested in what we do, we can never succeed no matter how stable our job is. My uncle James is a good example. He is a middle school teacher, which is a very stable job. However, he is not really interested in teaching. As a result, he is not very successful even at his fifties.
In conclusion, I think it is the best that we have a secure and satisfying job, because this kind of job helps us to make our living and have time to stay together with our family, and at the same time succeed in our career. I wish everybody could get such a job. (271 words)