The charts below show the percentage of time spent by working adults on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.
雅思 A 班作文考试饼图 (pie chart) 通常以组合图的形式出现，要求考生分析几个相关的饼图，在每个饼图中找到关键信息，并指出每个饼图的相关性。
The given pie charts illustrate how the working adults in a particular country spent their time on different activities in 1958 and 2008.
In 1958, average working adults spent 25% of their time on sleeping. Working took up 15% of their time, while the daily commutes to and back from work cost of their time in total. Apart from sleeping, working and commuting, which 10% consisted half of all the time, people 's free time was usually spent on relaxing at home (20%), hanging out with family and friends (24%), and some other activities (6%).
After half a century, by 2008, the way people allocated their time had experienced major changes. As is shown in the chart, sleeping time had been cut short to only 20% of the total amount. In contrast, the working time was prolonged by 4%, and the time of traveling to work also increased by 4%. With the increase of time related to work, people naturally needed more time relaxing at home. Besides, much less time (only 18%) was left for going out with family and friends.
All in all, comparing the way people organise their time, we can see that people now face more pressure from work and have less time to rest and relax. (209 words)
这个问题的数据来自两组相差 50 年的数据。每组数据明显可以分为睡眠时间、工作上下班时间、娱乐等时间三类。考生可根据这三大类进行汇总。
1 .开头: 转述主题
2 .描述 1958 的数据
3 .对比 1958年和 2008 的数据，分析最明显的变化
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